Tuesday, December 7, 2010

(Invisible)

 (Invisible)

P   a   c   i   n   g,
    POUNDing,

high
     and
           low,

     ump           ump
th       ing,   b        ing,

beat
 of
  my
         h           e
            a   r
                t.
              
You
STOP

and lOOk
     my w
            a
            y

I…wonder…what you
will
       DO.

But you
                                   leave
(me.)



You smell nice.

1 comment:

  1. My creative writing class didn't like it ending with "crying and dying."

    ReplyDelete

Keep it clean. I like receiving advice on my writing, but don't usually take it. Don't be offended.